Chair Threaded

Chair Threaded
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It’s alright don’t get up from your chair
I’m sure it’s quite a show to watch me hang by a thread
I never hoped for anything more – I swear
It’s alright don’t get up from your chair
I’m sure it’s quite a show to watch me hang by a thread
I never hoped for anything more – I swear
I know you of all people wouldn’t let me go misread

You’d better hope you love her enough to lose me
You’d better hope you love her enough to lose me

It’s alright you can watch
I’m sure it makes quite an interesting sight
It’s alright don’t get up from your chair
I’m sure it’s quite a show
To watch me hang by a thread
And I hope you enjoy it
Cause in a moment you know I’ll be dead
Cause you know soon that I’ll be dead

I am impressed, one more time. (And I hope you can enjoy it) is not weaved in. The rest sings very well. The least to say, a gutsy, feminine, fresh and stinging romantic poem / lyric piece. Be around… Criticize mine too. You ‘ve been there.

Flare I need help